That is so haunting and beautiful, but despairing as well.

Am I imagining it, or was that rhyming... I think it was, right? But that was good. Grr. I need to find better synonyms for 'good'. Don't take offense at my lame review, I'm just kind of upset right now. Your poem was something-that-means-I-liked-it! So- wait a second... YOU'VE WRITTEN 111 POEMS? OMIGOSH! That is awesome! Totally something to be proud of!