| Reviews for A Baseball Story |
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if cats could fly 9/7/12 . chapter 7this was the most amazing story ever! i cant't begin to explain the awesome-ness going on here, please update you have to! |
the unbirthday girl 7/31/12 . chapter 7I think this is hilarious. And the most ridiculous bet ever. |
the unbirthday girl 7/7/12 . chapter 6Short and sweet. :) I have an image in my head of everyone I know named Jason wearing pink now. I'll probably burst into giggles next time I see one of them. :P |
rookanga 3/21/12 . chapter 1please update! |
the unbirthday girl 3/2/12 . chapter 5You updated! Yay.:) This is really funny and kind of sweet-well, the last one's probably because I'm weird, but whatever. Good job!:D |
Manga Fan XD 2/23/12 . chapter 4This is the previously anonymous reviewer "Lovely." ...Hi! But yeah, cute story and all that. For some reason, I keep seeing Emma as Shimana and Jason as Zen from the manga Yumemiru Taiyou. Haha. manga/yumemiru_taiyou Ah, I can't find the one scene that I wanted to show. Hmm... Anyways, good luck and update soon! |
Manga Fan XD 2/23/12 . chapter 1Aw. How cute. :) |
the unbirthday girl 2/23/12 . chapter 4Oh, wow, I feel so sorry for him. This was really funny, and TE dialogue was the main reason why-so don't worry about it. Seriously, great chappie. |
the unbirthday girl 2/22/12 . chapter 3This is so funny.:) Glad you updated, and the girl's night should be interesting to read about-you're not going to skip it, are you? Anyways, you're still doing a great job with this. :D |
Predictator 2/22/12 . chapter 2Dude, this story is so freakin cute. I'm not even reviewing coz we made a deal, but coz I think it's freakin cute. oh, and you are so completing this story. |
the unbirthday girl 11/26/11 . chapter 2I like this chapter. I did catch a little thing where you wrote 'there' instead of 'they're,' though. Where she's loadding the app thingy? Speaking (well, typing) of that...I WANT ONE!:) |
Sikari888 11/1/11 . chapter 1Hahaha lol to the Potter talk. xD |
Predictator 10/21/11 . chapter 1Like I promised I will notify when I update my story and also review ur story in exchange of ur review. About your new story, its pretty good but unsatisfactory. Don't keep me hanging by writing only one chapter. BTW, read my new chap 10 |
the unbirthday girl 9/23/11 . chapter 1I liked it. It's good so far, keep writing! -HAPPY WRITING |
Bea Sauda 9/20/11 . chapter 1XD I love the ending! And hopefully yay first review if not akwardish...anyway Emmalise kinda sounds like my name Anelise no not that much...well Emma's 'relationship' with Yates is kinda like a boy that I'm very fond of kind of friendship but were not rich..well anyway I like it it's interesting and cute! |