Hey

As promised, here I am :)

Well, this one was truly moving. I really liked the way you kept me guessing up until the end the reason why Alice was waiting by the tree. I got that it was to meet her boyfriend, but I didn't expect the twist! Good stuff, I really enjoyed it!

Well done.

Best wishes

Vicky

At first I stumbled into your poem, only to be carried through the latter half with a grip on my heart. Nicely done!

wow. this poem is heart wrenching. i love how you leave it a mystery and ease into the actual situation of the poem. very good!