Cute, I like it. Though I'm sort of lost here. It's a short story and I like it, though it's sort of unclear. I like it anyway and nice job

I feel the need to play some Red Jumpsuit Apparatus now. I love the description you used; I felt like I was at the diner with them. The last paragraph feels a little rushed, but that could just be because I'm running on 4 hours of sleep and coffee. Overall, I really liked this story.