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   caapt.donavin 7/10/12 . chapter 5Now why would they bother leaving. did he feel bad for mooching or did Nichy decide that they had to keep moving so that Pa wouldn't find them? see now their in trouble Donnie |
| caapt.donavin 7/10/12 . chapter 4 Awe little lad has a bit of doapamein running through his vans now doesn't he? Donnie |
| caapt.donavin 7/10/12 . chapter 3 i'm glad that you gave them som sort of conflict at the start. please let this place just SEEM toio perfect. Donnie |
| caapt.donavin 7/10/12 . chapter 2 is there a real reason why he gives the squirl and the baby something different. i mean if he takes this good care of it it should be sanitary enough for the two to share. i like how you describe the new house. Donnie |
| caapt.donavin 7/10/12 . chapter 1 intence. i feel sorry for the lad. but i do have to ask, does he have a name. well i guesthat's the mystery of drinks and babies for yourcompany. wonderfully written and good variation of sentence leangths. Donnie |
