This is beautiful... the imagery and the power within the words. I have no words to describe it. Fabulous work :)

Wow, I really like this! Its so good! Sometimes you do just want everyone to be quite so you can get your bearings :-D

Great piece! There's some lovely imagery in this - I particularly liked: "signposts sent me in vicious circles", "twisting in the brambles" and "trinkets of sand". Maybe a point for improvement here could be a stronger connection between the imagery - links, or a running thread through the piece? Just a suggestion :) But overall, a really good poem that so many people could connect with.

sad poem

but greet words

leaves my heart hollow just by reading this story