Well, I have to say that your writing is a bit sloppy... your grammar isn't all that good either. The story is quite plain, and the charecters have no depth. At all.

But I digress, the story is rather... cute? Still, I seems that it has no plot. Is this just a sort of drabble or is it actually going to be a full length story?

Maybe you should edit your story before you post it, I'd rather you be a day or two late on updating then it have a lot of carless mistakes.

But whatever, do as you please. It is your story after all. But remeber, the reader is always right.

Galaxies Await

This is so sweet! It is so realistic! I love jolly ranchers!

wow I LOVE THIS! its realistic and it flows well! the chapters r a bit short bu reallly good writer! cant wait for next chapter! and gee the next chapter sound kinda weird, but im excited to see wht its about

I like it:) And you're welcome for the reviews. I can honestly say I have NOO idea what the next chapter is going to be about, but it sound pretty intresting. Update soon please? Keep up the good work!

I like it:) It's a cute little story you have going, keep it up. And yes, I think the next chapter should be "Ally and Jake" BTW, I personally love the relationship between Ally and Meg, they practiacally finish each others sentences. You said this was real right? Except for the last chapter that is. Well like I said, I think the story is cute.

Haha, cute. I love it:)