I loved reading your story and i can't wait to read more of the war of wishes. Please update more on that.

This was some good stuff, as usual. Love the way you write, and your story ideas are great. Enjoyed the ending, though I really don't understand your ranking system. Perhaps that's a good thing, have to wait and see. Hopefully not to long. Thanks for making all the garbage I read on here worth it. Keep up the good work.

I like the way you finaly debut his catch, that is Jack of All Trades. Hope to see more soon.

Nyaa, this is super cool, nyan x3

I really like your style, nya The way you write definitely establishes itself well, it's really cool to read, nyan x3

Wish there was more for me to say beyond that I'm totally waiting for the next chapter, nyan! Good luck keeping the story going, nya x3

Other than the super powers it's as if Ray's based on me...

This seems so epic, I wish I could sleep but still get my work done... XD

Lol Jamie and James sound like the Weasley twins...

LOOOOOOOOOOOL I thought they planned to do something like this when they said where they were going XD

Hehe another talent of his huh? XD

Wow, so he decided to play the hero and it didn't work out? Figures... :/

I wonder if he actually made everyone in the room disapear...

Lol at the regulated breathing, I always do that when I do exercise and yestuday I went joggin with my friend and I told him to do that XD

Lol does counting to 13 only work on him? I'll need to try it XD

So 13 does let him surpass whatever he's working on.

7 obliterates his enemies.

2 in people gets him into bad situations.

2 and 13 gives him invisibility.

while 8 gives him problems that trouble him.

That's dark man. Really really dark.

Didnt see that coming seriously, I thought he'd faint when he got to 13. Jack of all trades eh.

so maybe 13 lucky abilities or talents. Different from the usual regular stories. I'd like you to update sooner. Drill Sgt. is interesting, does he teach combat.

I really enjoyed the way this was written. It didn't follow the same predictable story line and really left me thinking "What. The. Heck." When I was done reading it. Bravo! Please continue.

Keep Writing

-Claire