Ooooh, the plot thickens. Not exactly one of those hair pulling endings, which is a good thing since I'de like to keep my hair for my pink highlights :-), but just enough of an ending to ask yourself. "What's going to happen now?"

Sorry I haven't been by in awhile, gonna leave the exuces behind, but I have been waiting for an update.

I had trouble reading this chapter. Probably as much trouble as you had writing it! I don't relate well to them, either . . . But they are a fascinating, passionate pair. I feel sorry for garrett, but I do hope this means there's hope of finding him a cure!

Not much to say on this one. The ending is rather giddy, and I love it!

More. More! Looking good so far.

You know, I don't think I have ever liked either Sagira or Garret quite this much. They need hugs! It's kind of nice to see the dark hour discussions everybody has to have, being had by them. I especially like how flawed they both are, sadistic and power-hungry, respectively. It's a nice touch.

RHF

Okay, trying again!

I really liked the structure of this chapter. I loved how, when Nathan had his vision and it made him so happy, I immediately thought of his family and what it's going to mean for him to leave them. THEN, when he thinks the exact same thing, I was like, bravo kid! hee It's all about the conflict.

Speaking of conflict, my other favorite part had to do with the discussions between Nathan, Sagira, and Miranda. The feelings are amazingly true to life, as is the dialogue for grieving, angry family members. Awesome stuff.

Plus: Nate and Margareta! Whee!

Looking good so far. I like the title and the rough interaction between family members, not exactly lovey dovey through and through.

I'll get to commenting on All Legends Die in a bit. Trying to catch up on everything over here.