|Reviews for New Kid in Town|
| blackdawn-70631 1/29/12 . chapter 4
Ooooh, the plot thickens. Not exactly one of those hair pulling endings, which is a good thing since I'de like to keep my hair for my pink highlights :-), but just enough of an ending to ask yourself. "What's going to happen now?"
Sorry I haven't been by in awhile, gonna leave the exuces behind, but I have been waiting for an update.
| Random Hero Fan 12/26/11 . chapter 4
I had trouble reading this chapter. Probably as much trouble as you had writing it! I don't relate well to them, either . . . But they are a fascinating, passionate pair. I feel sorry for garrett, but I do hope this means there's hope of finding him a cure!
| Random Hero Fan 12/26/11 . chapter 3
Not much to say on this one. The ending is rather giddy, and I love it!
| Blackdawn-70631 11/11/11 . chapter 3
More. More! Looking good so far.
| Random Hero Fan 10/16/11 . chapter 2
You know, I don't think I have ever liked either Sagira or Garret quite this much. They need hugs! It's kind of nice to see the dark hour discussions everybody has to have, being had by them. I especially like how flawed they both are, sadistic and power-hungry, respectively. It's a nice touch.
| Random Hero Fan 9/29/11 . chapter 1
Okay, trying again!
I really liked the structure of this chapter. I loved how, when Nathan had his vision and it made him so happy, I immediately thought of his family and what it's going to mean for him to leave them. THEN, when he thinks the exact same thing, I was like, bravo kid! hee It's all about the conflict.
Speaking of conflict, my other favorite part had to do with the discussions between Nathan, Sagira, and Miranda. The feelings are amazingly true to life, as is the dialogue for grieving, angry family members. Awesome stuff.
Plus: Nate and Margareta! Whee!
| Guest 9/28/11 . chapter 1
Looking good so far. I like the title and the rough interaction between family members, not exactly lovey dovey through and through.
I'll get to commenting on All Legends Die in a bit. Trying to catch up on everything over here.