Its really nice and interesting..hope u will update soon..

Oohh, suspense ;) Wonder what is written...

I'm afraid I am a little confused, is Tedric a friend of Marcel's family or why does he know so much about him? I hope my question is answered later on.

A very promising start, I am enjying your style of writing very much. I hope, once the plot gets going, that it will continue to be this way.