| Reviews for You Filthy Little Munchkin |
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Dawn Phantom 4/22/12 . chapter 1Haha, oh my, how I relate to this one! It's just...totally a topic I think about all the time, those annoying overacheving little... Very very well done. |
Beth Brooks 4/20/12 . chapter 1this is not a professinal review here but LOL AWESOME! love it! |
Boreeeed 12/15/11 . chapter 1I was good. I know some poems don't rhyme, but this would of been better if you rhymed it. It seemed choppy and semingly no point to it. Besides that, it was good. |
Astraea Athena 9/27/11 . chapter 1I really like the rhythm of the line 'Unerring, faultless, flawless' and the later alliteration of 'With feelings and flaws and fears' which ties the two lines together in contrast nicely. I also really like the tone of the poem in how infuriating perceived perfection can be from an outsider's view. |