Ohhh... suspicious...

I loove the story, though i've only just started reading it. i will be monitoring you from now on and as long as you continue to write, i shall continue to review!

I do like this story, but you need to keep an eye on your spelling and also the names of your characters - Joey was called Tony a couple of times.

I am pleased that you updated as Sierra is a great character and I want to learn more about her.

Me likesss! It flowed nicely. c:

Now I can't wait until the next chapter. xD

okay, I can't wait for the next chapter, perhaps some miracle occurs for Sahara? I thought this chapter was well written in the sense that it described Sahara through several paragraphs and actions. It's very fluent. Nice job. :D