OMG you turned this into the best poem ever! A simple. Comparison really drove this poem beautifully

It's like I can feel the sting of henna on me

I reallllllllllllllllly realllllllllllllly reeeeeally really reaaaaaaaaally rrrrrrrrrrrreally

Love this just a btw :3

It's beautiful and sad and heartbreaking

And over the top spetaculairly wow

nicely done, I like the repeating of the henna part.