|Reviews for The Witch and the Wolves|
| Minastauriel Dragonfriend 10/8/11 . chapter 1
"The only thing that could save us…wait, there was nothing that could save us."
This line (and everything after it) made me cry, you should definitely continue :))))
| SJR 10/2/11 . chapter 1
Such a determination in the last line! It really builds up Devi's personality. This was a very dramatic start to a story and a lot of death - it really got the reader involved in the tale. Great stuff!
| Shadowclanwarrior 9/29/11 . chapter 1
A little rushed, but it seems good so far as for plot line. I think you should slow down a little, it all came so fast. No complaints other then that :).