|Reviews for Just Out of Reach|
| Lixie 7/27/12 . chapter 17
I can't believe how fast you updated! And this chapter! I was screaming 'oh my god' the whole way through it in my head! I can't even find the words to express this! I cried part way through, my heart was pounding the whole time, and even now, I'm just like "SQUEEEEE!" You did it so brilliantly. I'm so so excited now.
| dr3 7/27/12 . chapter 17
Kieran returned to the fight for Terrence. & then claimed his man, that was a nice touch. Well finally our boys got together. Yay. But, I don't see how our boys are going to have an HEA there is too much riding against them.
| Persephone95 7/26/12 . chapter 17
Yeees! Oh my god i love it, absolutely love it! Yes yes dont worry, i will continue reading, but just because you made me addicted! Jaja oh my im so excited! Yes they finally get together *grins like a fool*
| xSadistxFujix 7/26/12 . chapter 17
God, I'm in love with this chapter. It was brilliant all around. Lots of action, lots of romance, what I've been waiting to happen (for what seems like forever) has finally happened! Now all the drama and stuff to follow is going to be sooooooo interesting! I can't wait! D
| xSadistxFujix 7/24/12 . chapter 16
Yay! Go save Terence, Kieran! I love them together so much. 3
| xSadistxFujix 7/24/12 . chapter 13
I just want to say something about your A/N, I have absolutely no doubt that you could get published. Your work is absolutely amazing but "pretty much anyone can get published" definitely isn't true. (although at times it doesn't seem like it seeing as how much AWFUL crap there is published) but in all actuality only (barely) 1% of all that is ever sent to agents/publishers is actually published-these statistics coming from multiple publishers and agents.
And I wouldn't get too down about people not reviewing. It sucks, I know. Its so much better getting reviews because then you KNOW they're enjoying it, but its not the end of the world if they don't. Especially on fictionpress. It's incredibly difficult getting reviews here on FP unlike how it is on FFnet-but then again, this story is doing incredibly well. You have 16 chapters and over 300 reviews. That is SUPER hard to achieve. I know some stories-some brilliant stories-that are even longer, have been around years, are a *series* who barely get 100 reviews.
Sometimes you get reviews, sometimes you don't. I'm mainly an FF writer but I'm TRYING to get into the original swing-again. I was first from a fandom where I was pretty damn well known but then I moved onto other fandoms and then finally this one fandom where people had recs and everything and my stories barely got noticed. It hurt, a lot, but I knew I had people out there liking it. I got favorites and alerts. And then I moved into a fandom-a one person fandom including all of me-and I wrote 9 fanfictions for it in about the span of 2 weeks maybe and I think I've gotten about 5-7 reviews TOTAL for all 9 of them.
My friend actually prefers to go by favorites and alerts-especially alerts, I believe because thats when they plan on reading more. Its nice knowing what EXACTLY a person likes about it and just hearing from them is enough to make anybody ecstatic, but I wouldn't let it get you down if you don't get as many reviews as you wish for.
Fact is, not everyone is going to review and I know there are people out there who DON'T review because the author keeps bringing it up and trying to get them to review.
Your stories are absolutely wonderful and you should be proud of yourself. I wish I could write as well as you do-or just close to actually writing that much, lol, but I doubt I will be able to-or at least not for awhile. I have a hard time planning stories which doesn't seem to be a problem for you.
You're an amazing author and I'm enjoying your stories. I love Terence/Kieran. I think they fit so amazingly well together (kinda like Avalon/Rowan -hint hint nudge nudge- That's totally one of my favorite FP fics. Ever. Just saying) and I applaud you for creating such a wonderful story! Especially because I usually hate fics with princes in an older time such as this, but I don't hate this one. Quite the opposite, really.
Sadly, it's rather late and I should be getting to bed, but I will totally read the last few chapters (so far) tomorrow. )
| skrillex 7/21/12 . chapter 16
Oh my god! This chapter! I need the next one right now! Pleeeeease update soon, I love this story so much and I need to know what happens. This was such a good chapter!
| L. H. Lawson 7/20/12 . chapter 16
Sublime anarchy! Terence surely has to bring Kieran home if they both make it through this. I would be very interested to know how close we are to the end. I'd like to hope it's far away, but you have done a lot of writing up till now, and things do appear to be reaching a climax!
Incredible work here. I am in love with this story.
| Nah She Stalkin 7/19/12 . chapter 16
Oh, sweet baby carrots! My heart could be likened to that of thunder at this moment in time. How could Kieran be so quick to hop on board with that plan? Shit. How could Terence possibly have thought that bringing a band of mysterious mercenaries into the camp would be a good idea? For fuck sakes, those two need to get it together! Or get together (or both).
This was an absolutely ravishing chapter and I'm bursting at the seams in excitement for the next installment.
*girly squeal* Goodness.
| Nameless Wonder 7/19/12 . chapter 16
Adamir is gonna get himself killed :( I hope the mercenaries don't capture Kieran. But then, if they do then the story is exciting because then Terence has to save him... I just don't want anyone I like to die. I even care about Cataline and Wilhelm! I'll be gutted for Terence if something happens to one of them!
I wonder if the mercenaries are just money-grabbing or if there is more to them. They just out stealthed everyone!
Please update again soon!
| Bananaface 7/19/12 . chapter 16
Thank you for your writing binge. I am in love with Kieran, I cannot deny it. Terence has got SO much catchup to do to equal Kieran in any way. Plus Kieran just works that fragile sexiness like nothing else. Epic chapter too! Kudos to you! I can't wait to see where this goes!
| mozie 7/19/12 . chapter 16
Dis chapter woz amazin (no surprise) but I don't get why Wilhelm woz so complacent! If dere were so many of dem, why did dey all trust dem? Is it becoz Terence gave dem da ok? If so, did he mess up becoz he woz thinking about Kieran too much? Even Adamir seemed to trust dem immediately. Id like to see dis explained a bit. You are one of my fave writers eva!
| sfb 7/19/12 . chapter 16
I was actually shocked when Stotgard turned evil! Like Adamir, I belived what I was told! Anyway, Kieran was so adorable rushing back to camp for Terence, and Terence getting drunk ws kind of cute too, like he just couldn't stand the love! I sense that the next chapter is going to be my favourite so far ;)
| Guest 7/19/12 . chapter 16
Ok, things just got red hot. I feel a bit paralyzed, you lulled me into a false sense of security! I almost want things to go back to being peaceful, when no-one was gonna get killed... but I say almost, because the excitement is winning out over my fear :)
I love that Kieran is delving into past studies and strengthening himself,rather than just seeking a protector like he used to! He still sounds so fragile though. And the way Terence described a convo with him being like sex was just so heartwrenching! Love love love. More please, another surprise chapter? ;)
| A.Collins 7/19/12 . chapter 16
That was so cruel as to leave it hanging like that. And who knows when the next time you're going to update is going to be!
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