Very well written:) It's a brief, light struggle that ultimately ends quite well.

Thanks for reviewing my story.

Your story is much better than you made it out to be, and I don't think there's any way to improve it.

Thanks for the reveiw on my story! Your critasism is much appreciated, and has been taken on board.

For your story, Its good! From what yo usaid, I was expecting a quick type-up wiht so many mistakes that I would be unable to read more then 3 words. I don't really know where to tell you to improve on though. Keep up the work!

Wow, this is really good! I was wondering if you could read and review my story called "Closed Doors Wanting to be Opened" I would really appreciate that!

wow. great story, i favourited it simply because of what a talented writer you are...