|Reviews for Buzz Words|
| physics223 10/2/11 . chapter 1
I feel the vitriol in this story, as if everything's so bleak. Cynicism has its roots in a reality that's quite frankly bad for the most part, but those patches of brilliance can make up for the drudgery and pain of our everyday life. I'm not saying this as a highly positive person, even. There will just be people better than you and worse than you, and the faster you can accept that, the better your world becomes.
I do see your point that those may just be saccharine buzz words - but they may also represent the relative truth that is found in every human being. You could do better with your grammar and consistency with the subject, but it's a decent job overall.
If you have time, please review my one-shot Quiz Bowl. Thank you!