|Reviews for Unidentified Love|
| Akane EternalSnow 4/2/12 . chapter 13
Yay to another great chapter but I'm wondering how bout more chapters haha take your time but don't take too long I always check to see if there is a new chapter thanks for answering all my reviews I like reading them :) :3
| Akane EternalSnow 3/8/12 . chapter 12
Yay new chapter wheeeeee :) yes it cleared everything soon I'll be putting out my story probably during the summer it's fun to review I'm going to review aaaaalllllll your chapters if that's ok with you :) see you till the next chapter
| Akane EternalSnow 2/14/12 . chapter 11
Omg I absolutely want to read the next chapter soooooo badly I like this as well I guess I like the whole story but I'm confused with the costume changes
| aspiringauthor95 1/28/12 . chapter 10
I normally like to read whole stories before I review them...just so I don't ask something that ends up being answered or clarified in the next chapter, so I read all ten chapters of this and was laughing out loud at some section of every single one. Great job on that! I absolutely love a story that makes me laugh. Update please!
| Akane EternalSnow 1/19/12 . chapter 10
Hehehe thanks I like this chapter as well my favorite character except the main one is Toni and rai I think they are funny actually I am trying to make some stories but I already imagined them and can never find the time soo when I do I would like you to read and review ;) :) :D
| Sapphire Cherry 1/7/12 . chapter 4
It's been a while since I've been on here to read this, and I can tell things might get interesting now that she's his servant.
| Akane EternalSnow 12/29/11 . chapter 9
I love this story its funny and I would love to read the next chapter :D
| Xander-A 12/1/11 . chapter 8
bin quite busy lately and hadn't had enough time to read you're story, but i picked it up from chapter 3 and i have to say i love it. lol right now i'm sleep deprived over it. can't wait for the next chapter update soon.
| georgster101 11/15/11 . chapter 7
Hm? Post what?
PS. Sorry if my last review sounded too nitpicky (is that even a word?). You're doing great so far.
PPS. EXPLODING PINEAPPLE CANNONS OF DOOM!
PPPS. Why did I just waste my time typing"EXPLODING PINEAPPLE CANNONS OF DOOM!"?
PPPPS. And why am I still writing all these PS.'s?
PPPPPS. I should probably stop now...
| georgster101 11/8/11 . chapter 6
Okeydokey! Here's a review! Great chapter and great story so far. The pacing is good too. Some of the minor characters need a little more depth, but don't worry about it, it's still fine. All in all, excellent work. Better than mine anyway...
| metallicskull96 11/5/11 . chapter 5
wah its just a short manga and im sure it hads the word 'manual' in it, i think you can find it at ? or mangafox i guess?
anyhow im very happy that you had um...whats the word? aha! replied to me desu!
its rather cool and still has a twist! love the chapter
dang...popular people are very dangerous..(*sigh)
there really scary...i just hope one day something like that is never gunna happened to me TT_TT
anyways.. pls update and good luck! (TO THE EXTREME!)
| metallicskull96 10/27/11 . chapter 4
haha totally love the story with a twist!
anyways...while i was reading i thouught to myself 'have i read some manga close to this?' then DING a BIG BULB!
yes i have! though the story was about a girl that is a witch and she cannot let anyone see her using any powers besides there husband or else they would become a cat forever...something like that...anyways im really looking forward for the next chapter! so excited! XD
| Tedi-Medoru 10/25/11 . chapter 1
I'm liking it so far but something about the writing... it sounds more like you're just telling what's happening instead of showing it. You do have a good idea but all I can say is work on making your writing more fluid. Potential readers might stop reading after the first paragraph, seeing as how chopped-up it sounds.
| Sapphire Cherry 10/16/11 . chapter 1
I'm really liking this so far. There's just something different about it that can't be explained.
| kobasakichu7 10/15/11 . chapter 3
I'm typing a review for all three chappies! XD
So...in my opinion, you managed to get all three chapters 'going'and flowing like how it would in manga...although I must say that the first chapter lacks a bit of intrigue.
In any case, sif you're going to keep your next chaps alive, I suggest you should refer to your third chapter, since I think that chapter is the most effective one to be used as a godd example. Try this formation in your stories: Intro-Problem-Climax-Solution (-End).
One story should have one or two climaxes. In any case nice story and keep it up! :D