|Reviews for Obsession|
| Mrstress 10/2/11 . chapter 1
I think this has the potential to be a really strong piece, but the passion that one normally gives their so-called obsession doesn't come through with your choice of words. I like the onomatopoeia, and the repetition as though the poem is being written whilst the author is knitting, but I think that there's a little room for improvement on the lines in-between.
| ForThoseNotBreathing 10/2/11 . chapter 1
Hmm. This was interesting, simple, but there seems to be a lot simmering under the surface, which brings out my curiosity.