|Reviews for Permanence|
| ScarredInternally 10/9/11 . chapter 1
There's a lot that we as humans could have found. There's a lot of unanswered questions floating around. Originality...maybe when the same question is asked over and over, we look for different viewpoints, opinions, or try to see if the answer has changed.
| Sepulchred 10/9/11 . chapter 1
I read this the day it was posted, and meant to review, but then I was suddenly late for work. Still, it stayed with me the whole day, and I thought about it a lot. I don't know why. Maybe because it's Meaningful, as all your writing is, and as mine has never been. Nonetheless, thank you for that.
I like the tone you've used. It seems very detached, even though it's personal, almost as if it's a case study of some sort. 'Could' emphasizes the impartial observer thing, but it bothers me somehow, and I instinctively keep changing it to 'should' when I read it (I understand why you used 'could' instead of 'should' though).
| recycle rhymes 10/3/11 . chapter 1
I really liked the last thing you quoted and it's an interesting idea.