(please, please don't think i'm strange for reviewing loads of your stories, it's just, i really like your writing and i think you deserve more reviewers. please don't be weirded out.)

anyways.

this is a rather haunting piece, it creates a sort of worried feel inside of me - i do so hope this isn't based off of any real experiences.

i like the way this was composed, the description makes the images very vivid.