i am two days late in responding, and i feel like i shouldve been the first review. sorry :-) i just got internet back, which makes me very happy. i dont think a life without internet is possible?

:-)

ANYWAY. i live out in the country, past this farm with cows a little ways, but i could picture the scenery. and your writing is like poetry, and it makes everything amazing. when i got the pm how excited i was was probably unhealthy. but. i love this so much. your writing is beautifuuuuul, and so was the story. like, how you mentioned her pastel skirt and pale legs a few times..and just how everything is worded, and heathers thoughts, and..

i dont know. but. thank you so much for this, because i can never find any good femmeslash and this was perfect. sad as always, but perfect. what good is a happy ending anyways..?

but im still going to think they get back together :-P

gosh. my love for this is unhealthy. im going to read it a gazillion times. (-:

That was good, Katy.

You write very beautiful things.

I like this a lot. The natural imagery and unexpected details. Everything feels real and immediate, down to the very honest pain.