It was a bit short. but other than that it was good.

Great details; you're a talented writer. Despite how many reviews you may get, I do hope you update.

great story. UPDATTEEE

Interesting...

I can't really say much, to be honest, simply because at the moment I've no clue what's going on.

It's quite good so far, though, even if there are a couple typos.

I look forward to reading more.

Yes, I know, I promised to review XD

" Every time I put my paw down I hear a crunch that reminds me of a bone breaking under pressure." I like this sentence. It fits.

Eventhough it's from the thoughts of an animal, keep in mind that the sentences have to... flow. I don't know if you get what I mean, but whatever XD

And other then that... like I said, your detail skill has improved ;)

xxx