this was really interesting. Hopefully you do feel like writing more of a story for them. because there wa no answers in this, only questions, and while that works for some stories, this one I feel could go so much further and better if you kept writing it.

Otherwise, I liked it :)

Happy Writing, drats.

P.S. please check out my story, "what I wish", and review?

Very cute; Kris...

I'm looking forward to reading more! :D