This is wonderful, you've captured everything so perfectly! I can relate to it on a lot of levels, and I think everyone can in some way or another.

Great work!

Arsideus

I really like this. It's so true that someone can be exactly the opposite of what they portray themselves to be. How so many people out there are simply what they think others want them to be. I am glad you have figured this out for yourself. Beautiful poem.

I think you did a good job. The poem really seems to capture the feelings you must have had at the time