|Reviews for I See The Smoke But All I Hear Is Cheering|
| Snowlilly31497 8/8/12 . chapter 1
I loved your uses of repetition. "...like a fire, burn on."
"I See The Smoke But All I Hear Is Cheering" is a great poem!
| key1877 10/9/11 . chapter 1
I really like this. Your wording is very creative and unique.