|Reviews for Our Secret Weakness|
| ImmanenceEnsured 9/10/12 . chapter 1
I don't exactly know how, but this was incredible, in some way. The words felt amazing, the stream of the words, even if at times it was a bit awkward, I enjoyed that awkwardness.
I wish he'd hold my hAnd, ...
"I wish I'd nicked something Else." ...
I wish he knew how I fElt, ...
These lines sounded RIGHT. Perfect.
| someplacenice 3/4/12 . chapter 1
Wow, just wow. This is so good, the varying lengths of each line makes the flow smooth and really nice to read. It's really beautiful; I love how you mix thoughts with what really happening. This is amazing, well done :D x
| GreenGrass1 3/2/12 . chapter 1
I always admired people who can write poems because I can't. I enjoy this poem. Loose and flowing and just brimming with emotion. Your story-telling through a poem reminds me of Robert Frost - my all time favourite.
| Gabriel Stone 1/5/12 . chapter 1
Picturesque. There is no other word able to describe this poem. Just... I can't even place it into words.