Amazing! Can't wait to read the next mystery!

This is really good. Thanks for posting this cool story

I had the privilege to beta read this story, but personal pressures prevented me from giving it the attention it deserved. Thankfully, Nutterfly is a joy to proof for - I rarely have to wield the proverbial red pen. Should any errors remain, I take full responsibility.

Having said that, there is more to a successful story than proficient grammar and good spelling, which can be learned. What you can't teach is how to write a great idea, in an interesting way, and engage the reader. Nutterfly is a natural. Her stories are always recognizable for the quirky way she looks at the world, and it is a style I thoroughly enjoy. This story did not disappoint.

Brava, my dear, another gem in your literary necklace.

interesting hte plot thickens. always wanted to say that. really good job.

interesting, very interesting. i got to say you brought these out fast. the accidents are strange i don't think jake killed her. just my guess. good job and keep it up.

pretty good start. the teacher was a little creepy,lol but overall good job.