|Reviews for Killers|
| DappledKarma 5/13/13 . chapter 1
That was great. It had a dark twisted beauty to it. The story was engaging, and the characters fascinated me. The sex was great (or should I say disturbing?) too. XD
YOUR STORIES ARE AWESOME.
| Aizawa Minami 7/22/12 . chapter 1
Wow, what I got to say is... that this story is very exhilarating and interesting! I love it! Excuse me for my dark and twisted fantasies on this story. Great job!
| I'll remember you this way 3/13/12 . chapter 1
This was quite intense. I'm honestly disturbed by this. I liked the world you created for these two. It would be interesting to know how these characters ended up as they are. I was fascinated by this story and would care to read more.
The last line threw me.
I noticed a few mistakes, if you care.
"What's on your mind?" He asked (he shouldn't be capitalized)
But, the ocean breeze and straight-through breezeway of the café kept its air fresh and warmfor the most part warm, if not cool (warm and for are conjoined.)
| hamm3rheart 1/10/12 . chapter 1
wow...so...that ending...through me for a loop...had NO IDEA that they were siblings...shocking...though I guess I should've had some idea when you said they looked almost the same...but eh...I was just so engrossed in the story that I paid it no mind, really...xD
VERY GOOD WORK HERE, SIR...once again, your attention to detail and just dialect and the way you described "sex" but not "smut" is simply refreshing. I love it.