I think its great! Dont worry, I dont think your repeating words. But it may be going abit too fast. Have George or someone ask her out then they have a fight. Or her enemy gets Chloe to think Tess was stealing Chase just to make her jealous. Something like that would be interresting!

nice again. i know, school is so hard, but the weekend had finally come. break from some hws finally!

I love this chapter...I'm hoping and praying that Chase and Tessa will kiss each other soon...Tessa obviously had feelings for him for a very long time...but I hope that Chase has actual true feelings for her as well...please update soon

BFF moments are good. Everyone needs a BFF moment, even the heroin of this ever progressingly (not a word, I know) amazing story!

Without humor, life sucks

Without courage, life is hard

Without love, life is hopeless

Without a friend like you...

Life Is Impossible D

Tess needed some BFF part, I agree

Without a friend like that, life is impossible. (I love that quote.)

i totally luv this story. im addicted to it already! :)

A lot like twilight, but a lot less cheesy! I am in love! I am thoroughly addicted! I need more! Pretty please with Chase on top?

That was awesome...please update soon

I like it. It has the chick flick touch to it, without all the other annoying stuff, you know what I mean? Anyways, keep writing. And if you want CC, I'll give you some next chapter because I really couldn't find anything wrong with this chapter.

Alice

omg, its really good so far. r u gonna continue it? keep it up! :)

Love it! If the beginning is any indication, this is going to be an amazing story!