Amazing poem

Makes me feel all happy and stuff

Very very very very well done

I really enjoyed reading this and I think you should be proud of this piece because it is fantastic! The imagery is so vivid and really flows well! It really drew me in and you give this air of mystery as to what people are staring at outside of their windows, I thought it may be a firework display because you refer to the crayon box but I could be wrong :) Brilliant and keep writing!

Very insightful.