Still love it. Love it all. I want to put you on a leash and take you home with me. I'm not going to point out the grammatical errors because I don't want to be redundant (there are just a few typoes and a forgotten apostrophe), but good God that's all I can find wrong. Maybe I just don't have that high school English teacher brain that makes me criticize every piece of literature that comes in front of my face.

This was beautiful.