|Reviews for World War III|
| fiddlergreen 5/12/13 . chapter 3
Hi there, interesting story, way too complicated with all those names and people having multiple other identities, try laying out the ground rules of your fantasy world before diving too deeply into the plot, and cut your cast of characters to a third.
Lots of imagination anyway - keep it up.
| XxUnderworlDxX 11/23/11 . chapter 1
This story is really good so far! However, I do think it would be helpful if there were descriptions of each character included.