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| Reviews for I Would Kill For You |
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   Angelheart96 1/5/13 . chapter 12This is absolutely amazing, please update soon! |
| BlackStone798 10/27/12 . chapter 11 i have one word for you: Update! |
| sharkprose 9/16/12 . chapter 1 I like it, but you want it to hit hard right from the get-go. THIS should be your first paragraph (and I tightened) - hope you don't mind :) He was there again, watching me. For the past week he's been there, just standing on that damn corner, never crossing, just watching. He has been there, in that same spot, around the same time every day this week. Maybe I'm just being paranoid. He could just be going to work or something. Or maybe he just liked standing on that corner. There are weird people in the world. |
| mentalmidget007 8/11/12 . chapter 9 well done on this, especially with the cliff hangers kept me wanting to read more. apart from the occasional spelling errors, this is an excellent story line, keep it up :) |
| angar123 8/11/12 . chapter 9 Wow! This is ABSOLUTELY CAPTIVATING! I love it and am totally looking forward to the following chapters. The only problem, which is only a lil problem, is that in some places you have a few spelling errors, but other than that, all is amazing! |
| N.M. Poynter 8/1/12 . chapter 8 Wonderful so far! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. One small correction: Chapter 1 - "I could tell his specific age, but I was pretty sure he wasn't older than thirty." I think "I couldn't tell..." might work a bit better. Other than that, just keep up the good work! |
| Kinzichi 7/25/12 . chapter 8 Ah! You're so cruel with your cliff hangers! |
| Kinzichi 7/5/12 . chapter 7 I rather like your story. I'm a sucker for anything involving kidnapping! There are a few holes here and there but its such a fun read! The names are all so unique, I look forward to learning about Mr. Kidnapper. So don't leave us hanging! Update soon! |
| PrincessOfTheGardens 6/29/12 . chapter 6 I love your story so much! It's very expressive and realistic. Continue |
| julianmarq 6/10/12 . chapter 5 Looking forward to the next chapter. |
| haliad 6/4/12 . chapter 4 Good so far, I can't wait to find out more about this guy and why he chose her to kidnap and "love". |
| julianmarq 4/20/12 . chapter 4 this story is so well written and interesting, here's hoping you continue it. |
| Dani Blade 10/30/11 . chapter 2 creepy! but im loving it! cant wait for more! |
| Sheaver 10/15/11 . chapter 1 Update! |
| Dani Blade 10/14/11 . chapter 1 this sounds like its going to be a great story! there are a few spelling errors, but other that that its great, cant wait for more! D |
