Oh my gosh, this is just outstanding. :)

I really liked this piece. I liked the title to begin with, it was a nice contradiction. I also liked how it tied into the end of the piece, but was still different from it. It wasn't what I was expecting. The format worked really well too. The repetition and lists of all the things she did or he did. It definitely drew me in. I loved the story behind it too. I felt so bad for the narrator and was happy when she came to that realization in teh end. Nicely done.

PS Review Marathon this weekend (link in my profile.)

Wonderful poem. You really are a magician with words.