friggin loved it! intriguing and a page turner(so plz make a chapter 2 so i can turn it ;) )

Interesting. You might want to slow down and pace yourself more. I'm not going to stop reading a story because of grammar and punctuation, but some might, so try to watch for mistakes. You seem young, and I don't want you to be discouraged from writing because of a possible lack of reviews, so I'm definitely going to follow and be looking for more from you! (if you like, that is)