|Reviews for School Warriors: A Simple Delinquent Story|
| JohnnyZwei 5/16/13 . chapter 8
D'awww, such a cute chapter, it's a nice breather after all the action XD
Poor Touma doesn't quite have anyone to be shipped with yet, but it's cool, whether or not he has a shipping partner doesn't necessarily affect how awesome he is -w-b
| JohnnyZwei 5/14/13 . chapter 7
Woah, that was one awesome brawl! :D
To be honest, I didn't expect the lesser gangs to have a change of heart, I pretty much imagined that it was kinda gonna go Dynasty Warrior Style P, but it's cool to see Shiv's hard work pay off.
But hmmm! HMMMM!?
What is this, it seems Akemi may have not yet completely left her delinquent past behind her if she nearly got into a fight, perhaps we'll see her participate in a battle soon!
| Katsurou Shimizu 5/12/13 . chapter 8
Oh my, right after my last review, we have this chapter that awards more shipping points to Akemi and Shivamaru. It's a nice touch to see how their back stories sort of parallel one another with their parental situations.
[Oh! Uh-Um...A car hit me?]
- I am so using this excuse next time I get into a fight xD
Forgot to mention of course, liking your bonus chapters, especially the quirky way in which they flesh out the three characters.
| Katsurou Shimizu 5/12/13 . chapter 7
Ah... been waiting for this kickass battle scene.
[ B-But three against a hundred? That's impossible!]
- Half wishing that it had been 3 against all, then it would have been more dramatic and more Dynasty Warriors style. But still, Shivamaru's approach paid off after all.
For some reason, I growing intrigued at the possible romance situation between Akemi and Shivamaru, more so than the myriad of characters from other factions (which is one of the criticism I could possibly give. Too many characters to keep track of. Only the Kaimon revolution trio and Akemi are freshest in my mind... with the exception of Kenshin from the Gaiden side story)
Of course, it could be still be incorporated in a battle situation, in manly Pogo style. Let's see if that happened. ;)
| Katsurou Shimizu 5/11/13 . chapter 4
Akemi. Join the tsundere camp over there.
Date. Amusing as always.
The furore over the lighters... oh dear... the trio... trying to exude badass but continuing to fail.
Good luck with uniting Chin... I mean the East, fellas!
| TheBloodEdge 5/11/13 . chapter 20
And hence, another arc comes to an end. Wait, summer vacation? SWIMSUITS!
| Lord Slayer 5/11/13 . chapter 2
Kind of hard to keep track of everyone this way, especially since I don't know what anyone looks like.
| Lord Slayer 5/11/13 . chapter 1
A pretty lofty goal, and all the more power to you for it, but the script-style formatting doesn't work at all for me. You can't capture the power and energy of a fist fight (or any fight) with an itty-bitty line inside parenthesis.
| JohnnyZwei 5/11/13 . chapter 6
Guess who finally decided to get back to reading this story? XD
Lol, I guess the Kaimon Revolution must really seem desperate now huh? I wonder how'd people react if they found out about Date's idea XD (I wonder if it'd backfire :P )
Ringo doesn't sound so bad now that we've seen her, though this jerky attitude to each other seems mutual, does I see a little love triangle coming to be eventually?
ONTO THE NEXT CHAPTER!
| Y. S. Wong 5/11/13 . chapter 2
Jeez Touma, such a debbie downer.
Lol, was that a reference to Densha Otoko, Akemi? I like her character. She knows how to say the right things and she and Shivamaru have good chemistry. The race sequence between them at the beginning was hilarious as well.
And then Touma and Shivamaru make up. BEST FRIENDS FOREVER!
| Ryou Arubin 5/9/13 . chapter 13
Great conclusion to the arc! Yay for Denji Okubo! :D
| Ryou Arubin 5/9/13 . chapter 12
Ahh, was kind of expecting Akemi to break Shivamaru's legs or arms by accident just so she can win... but oh well!
Heh, my guess was spot-on indeed! Denji hadn't spent the past two years doing nothing! Would love to see the Outcasts remain by themselves and go up against other factions!
| Ryou Arubin 5/8/13 . chapter 11
Bowling session... I think Akemi would win Shivamaru by accidentally hitting him with the ball, causing him to drop out or something XD. Just guessing.
The outcasts are finally together! So far, Okubo seems to be a force to be reckoned with, but Denji... like see how the fight between him and Watanabe would turn out in the next chapter.
I hope Denji had made use of his suspension period to toughen himself (or did he just fool around?)
| Ryou Arubin 5/8/13 . chapter 10
Denji is a great addition to the cast yo! Would love to see more comedy scenes involving him in later chapters!
| Ryou Arubin 5/8/13 . chapter 9
Ahahaha, I should've expected that they were going to play baseball once the crowd came in. Funny nonetheless :D
Transition to Kaimon Frontline's view wasn't too clear. You could have put "Later that day at the school yard" as a paragraph alone.
Other than that, love the characters in Kaimon Frontline. Great job on their profiles too. Onto the next arc!