I like this story! :3 can't wait for other chapters? :P

I thought it was going reallyyy good - and then it ended. :O

Would've liked it if there was more tension between the pair, I guess. I mean, Allison didn't seem like she was torn apart by his presence or anything - she was just trying to avoid him, etc...

But otherwise, I liked the plot and the characters (god bless green eyes)!

SnoQueen

Might want to watch the pacing on here. The ending is a bit too rushed. A little editing never hurt in that regard.

That aside, it's a cute story and fairly well written.

- Beau

Allo there bff. Just liked to say it really is amazing :) Don't worry! If you hate it there's time to improve.

Sincerly,

Your best friend...

livesimply