This is incredibly sad, and very raw. It's true that family's can fall apart from the stresses of losing someone so near, and this was clearly depicted in your writing. X

This is still extremely sad...I don't think you had to take anything out or change it all. It's extremely touching. I still find it ironic that Faith gets cancer. It's just a horrible thing when my aunt got cancer I remember it felt like. I was afraid she would die. I was only 5 or 6 then though

Amazing beautiful poem

I still hate how life can be so unfair

It's not really a disease but a heart that's forever damaged even if you survive

Good luck Faith! :D