|Reviews for That Stupid Sequel|
| MAH1 10/22/12 . chapter 14
I'm so happy now! I was afraid that Kyle wouldn't get over his problems but this hopeful ending was so nice. Really loved all the chapters, thank you!
| Lucy Belle 1/11/12 . chapter 14
A few of your chapters in here has spelling errors. As a warning. And despite what you may think, it wasn't a horrible ending. Don't quite know what the thought was behind putting two characters we never met in there, but it did give insight to the work life of the stars of the show.
| seventhswan 12/10/11 . chapter 14
oh piss! I read this the other day on my phone and forgot to review.
Anyway, aweeeee! I'm glad things worked out for them. You were right when you said codependency isn't like, healthy, really, but something about it is cute. ((goes off to die in hell somewhere))
Great story! I can't wait to hear more from you in the future! Tell all your characters I love them.
| prostock69 12/8/11 . chapter 14
Ch. 14: Still sobbing! Damn! I loved this sequel. It was perfect.
My favorite lines:
Kyle stared at him for a long quiet moment, then grinned and started laughing. "You just want my top three relationships," he said. "Bronze, silver, and gold."
The teacher couldn't help laughing and tugged Adrian into his arms. "Can I stay the night in here?"
The comment earned him and soft swat to the shoulder. "We've been going out all of a minute, and you want to sleep in my bed?" Adrian gasped. "I don't think so. I'm not that easy."
| prostock69 12/8/11 . chapter 13
Ch. 13: This chapter totally made me cry, dammit. And now I have a headache! Thanks alot! lol.
| prostock69 12/8/11 . chapter 12
Ch. 12: I teared up when Noah told Gabe why he wanted a house. I think Gabe finally realizes what an ass he's been lately.
And where is Skylar's apology for getting slugged in the head? Geez!
| prostock69 12/8/11 . chapter 11
Ch. 11: OMG, OMG, OMFG! Gabriel punched Skylar! Shit!
And the scene at the hospital when everything is revealed was f'ing genius! I was on the edge of my seat reading it. OMG! Gabe should be charged with assault. Stupid asshole.
| prostock69 12/8/11 . chapter 10
Ch. 10: How sad that Noah is in a relationship with a closeted gay guy who is ashamed of being seen with him AND Noah has never been on a DATE! He deserves to be wined and dined in PUBLIC!
Sigh...Oh shit! Did Gabe just hit Skylar! Oh F'ing NO!
| prostock69 12/8/11 . chapter 9
Ch. 9: I am really LOVING this sequel. Just wanted you to know.
Ok, no fallout from Ethan being left alone with Kyle.
Oh shit! Gabe thinks Noah is cheating on him! Sigh. And he sees him meeting with a "guy"...who happens to be SKYLAR! OH f'ing NO! (FacePalm)...this is going to get bad.
Yeah! Kyle is moving back in their apartment. I'm dying to know what Kyle's problems are that he can't commit in a relationship, even though the only relationships (2) he's had have been with Adrian.
| prostock69 12/8/11 . chapter 8
Ch. 8: Dominic is getting married! Wow, it took Ethan 6 weeks after he bought the rings to propose to Skylar because he thought he would say no! After everything they went through? Even after being together for 5 years! Shit. Poor Ethan :)
Ok, picturing those two sitting down watching Twilight was funnier than hell. But I hate to admit, my husband LOVES the Twilight series. He's a hopeless romantic and loves vampires!
Ut oh, Sky's drunk and can't drive home. Ethan is going to be home alone with Kyle. This can't go well.
| prostock69 12/8/11 . chapter 7
Ch. 7: Noah's mystery boyfriend is GABE? Yes. Loving this little plot twist. Now, I had to go back and reread everythig said about Gabe because I really didn't pay as close attention as I should have. Gabe is fighting with boyfriend. Ethan asks him why he just doesn't tell him that he cares. Gabe says it's not that easy. But what made me go eh? was this:
"I didn't know why Gabe always talked to me. I figured it was because he felt more comfortable talking to a gay man about it, but I'd have thought he was too paranoid to strike up a friendship with an openly gay guy. But he wasn't, apparently, so I got to listen to his whining."
So Gabe in the closet? He's not openly gay and worried about people hating him for loving Noah? This is probably the crux of their fighting then. Not cool. So why would Noah want to design a house for them? It seems pointless to do if Gabe isn't willing to be open about their relationship! This just gets more and more twisted! Love it.
| prostock69 12/8/11 . chapter 6
Ch. 6: Whoa! What is the deal with Noah and his elusive boyfriend? Dying to know!
And Dominic's surprise! Can't wait to find out!
| prostock69 12/8/11 . chapter 5
Ch. 5: No, you are NEVER too old to play Mario Bros! I still play Super Mario Bros and Super Mario Galaxy and I'm 42 :)
Kyle and Adrian finally spoke and Kyle has to go to counseling. Wow!
I loved the last few paragraphs of this chapter. Skylar had to practically "force" Ethan to date him? lol. And Adrian had more guts than Ethan did? Really? And Ethan agreed. Hmmmm.
| prostock69 12/8/11 . chapter 4
Ch. 4: Ut oh, Ethan is beginning to get resentful towards Gabe, Kyle and now Skylar. Something eventually has to give.
You know, I can sense from your writing that Ethan and Sky are adults now, not teenagers. You've done an amazing job at aging them (with the little bit you have written so far.) :)
So Gabe finds himself in a similar situation Ethan was in back in high school: Liking someone he was too scared to tell. Interesting! I can't wait to see what happens with Kyle and Gabe. Hopefully it doesn't cause any problems between Sky and Ethan.
| prostock69 12/8/11 . chapter 3
Ch. 3: What is up with Kyle and being afraid to commit to Adrian? OMG, it took him 3.5 years to get him to move in with him then 2 weeks later, he breaks up with Adrian? Shit!
I have to tell you that I love that your chapters are short. You get to the point without a bunch of extra fluff. I really love your style of writing. :)