|Reviews for Redhaven|
| HorcruxesandHallows 10/26/11 . chapter 1
No! Don't leave it there! I was just getting into it and then it FINISHED!
One thing I would say, check your punctuation when writing speech.
It needs to say, for example:
"No," I said. OR "No," he said.
Use a comma as the speech and the whoever said it bit is all one sentence.
And for exclamation marks, it's much the same:
"No!" he said. Etc. Please update soon! :)