AMAZING! I like the topic, it makes you wonder and want to read on. I escpecially love the last line! I LOVE IT!

I don't usually like rhyming poems, but once again I'm proven wrong.

It's pretty thought provoking. Makes me wonder, and pause. I like it. Great job.

Not criticism, but the "palms" line seemed random to me. Was there an intended meaning? Or was it just put there?