|Reviews for Cliff Dive Tango|
| Nobody-n-Particular 8/7/12 . chapter 1
I can't tell whether they are having a fight or an intense sexual experience... haha. It seems a mix of both, a bit sadistic but they like it that way. The last line doesn't quite flow with the rest - I need more of a build up toward it. I understand its relationship to the cliff dive but nothing more - it hasn't quite been earned.