This story was absolutely fabulous. A quick peak into the mind of a crazy, and the way you used repetition and over all syntax of the sentences really helped this story in making your character seem exceedingly realistic.

Wow. This was great. You really captured His special insanity very well. There was a grammar error in there somewhere, toward the beginning, but that was not that big of a deal. Also, watch which "God" you capitalize.

Regardless, it was really good, and I sincerely mean that. It's scary how much fun it is to write in a crazy's point of view. Dolfona was way too much fun.

I read Dolfona the other day, and it was not as good as I remembered it being. That was one of the best pieces I had written, but now that I read it again, it could use a lot of work.

Anyway, this is a review for you, not me. You've pulled off another success. Keep it up!