|Reviews for A Singular Sin|
| NagainaFier 11/2/11 . chapter 1
This story was absolutely fabulous. A quick peak into the mind of a crazy, and the way you used repetition and over all syntax of the sentences really helped this story in making your character seem exceedingly realistic.
| Lillian Dooley 10/23/11 . chapter 1
Wow. This was great. You really captured His special insanity very well. There was a grammar error in there somewhere, toward the beginning, but that was not that big of a deal. Also, watch which "God" you capitalize.
Regardless, it was really good, and I sincerely mean that. It's scary how much fun it is to write in a crazy's point of view. Dolfona was way too much fun.
I read Dolfona the other day, and it was not as good as I remembered it being. That was one of the best pieces I had written, but now that I read it again, it could use a lot of work.
Anyway, this is a review for you, not me. You've pulled off another success. Keep it up!