|Reviews for Perishable|
| abbiedabs36 3/2/12 . chapter 1
wow. sooo good! way better than anything i could write! ur beyond the moon and im still on earth. :) one thing... some words are advanced so somepeople would find it difficult but i think thats what makes it more amazing u can really manipulate words :) in a good way!
| Lavender Town Massacre 10/27/11 . chapter 1
Well, for a persuasive essay, you did manage to convince me. I've read Lord of the Flies a long time ago, and I don't really remember a lot of details, but this essay jump started my memory.
I didn't see a lot of grammar mistakes, but the one thing I think you should work one is your paragraphs. Some of them are really long, and hard to read.
All in all, good work.
Oh yeah, there's a song called. "You're Gonna Go Far Kid," by the offspring that's about the Lord of the Flies.