The imagery in this is beautiful. I also love the raw and emotional feel to the piece, you have a wonderful talent :)

This is so beautifully written, and the descriptions are fantastic, really vivid in the mind's eye. You should be very proud of this piece :)

Not what I expected by the title, as I was expecting something about nature, but it surpasses all my expectations. The imagery is so vivid, and the storyline unfolds in the same manner as the nrrators life, slow at first, but then all at once. I love the piece!
The only thing I don't get is the need for extra c's on the word curve.
Keep Writing!

Wow, I really love your writing style.. )

Wow. This is very powerful. As i said before your imagery is amazing.