|Reviews for Monster|
| yWrite 8/9/12 . chapter 1
Chilling is definitely the word for this story. Funny how easy it is to overlook the obvious choices.
| Princess Destiny1 6/16/12 . chapter 1
Wow, that was a really chilling story and I loved reading it. I thought that the monster was under the bed, but when the sister checked the room, she did look there. You might want to take out that discrepancy. :) I'm surprised that you don't have more reviews...
| angie hofer 12/21/11 . chapter 1
Ada was trying to keep the piece long enough for them to eat. You should change that part. But whoa! That is a story!
| FlyingCatFish 11/26/11 . chapter 1
bone-chilling would be a good word to describe that.. i'm impressed..