very nice, I especially like "I'll never say What I had on my mind"

Daawwwhhhh... Reminds me of a High School Sweetheart kinda thing...

Aww...this is beautiful. I envy your ability to rhyme and still make it sound actually normal. I love it. :)

(Yes, I'm in the writing club, send me more details? *raises eyebrows hopefully*)

Mmm... I like this one too. Not long and annoying, short and to the point. Nice non-complicated rhyming that lacks trite overused terms and it's sweet... Very nice.

Azzie