| Reviews for Monsters during Halloween |
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FtXNn 1/5/13 . chapter 1Hahah lol. XD this is hilarious! Dude I can't stop laughing! |
Firewind555 1/2/13 . chapter 1Great story! What impresses me was how you made Wolf's character-you did some irony by removing that ferocious personality and replacing it with a innocent playful one. |
MysteriousFire 12/23/12 . chapter 1I love this story! Immediate favourite! I just love Wolf. He's so cute! And his tail is adorable! And I like the whole conecpt of this story. I created a story in the Sims once that's almost exactly the same, including a werewolf, a vampire and some kind of plant-human. And I never finished it, but reading this feels like it's finished now somehow. And it was funny how they found out they were real monsters, and good that you stopped right at that point. It was the best possible ending I think. |
jakbnimble 10/19/12 . chapter 1Love the ending! Ah, my Halloween fix is satisfied. Thank you. :-) |
The Hetalians 7/14/12 . chapter 1Nya! I love it! Lol... Abegail at the end was funny. xD Thankfully, I don't go trick-or-treating. But good story. :) |
Mylilblackpen 6/17/12 . chapter 1I really like this story - my favourite character being Wolf. For some reason he just makes me laugh and I loved the imagery you gave him when they first stepped outside. I loved it from start to finish! This is going to be a favourite of mine :) |
TheAliensDidIt 3/8/12 . chapter 1 Heya Phantom, Aliens here. Review is long overdue; I'm sorry, I'm a forgetful lazy bum. This story is interesting enough. I like how you've given the monsters human personalities and the moral at the end. One-shot sequel would be nice, I think. I wonder what the humans will do to the monsters next? On to the less pleasant stuff - a few spelling and punctuation mistakes here and there, nothing too serious. Also, well, I like this story, but it's a bit too predictable and I felt that you could do better. I feel like a nitpicker right now. Huh. Anyway, keep at it, bro. |
ChibiJinchuuriki 12/6/11 . chapter 1Hi long time no see on fanfiction :D Wolf, Frank, Milosh... the comedy trio XD Wow they really need to go outside some more... I mean missing out on pepsi? XD And that moral is true in so many ways, I better watch out on Halloween in the future... Nice story |
Cloud 10/31/11 . chapter 1 Awwww! I really wanted to hug Wolf! . He was so cute and Milosh sounded awesome and Frank... he was the wise one -.- Thank you for the story! It made my day with all the homework I got today D |
CRAZEDbySUGAR 10/30/11 . chapter 1oh man *Hugs* You are so sweet:) and I love the story lol it reminded me a little bit of the Halloween story I'm still trying to finish...the difference is a human going to a monster party (they celebrate every year) lol I absolutly love this story (especially since the monsters didn't know what a costume was XD) |