| Reviews for A Small'ish Love Story |
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Ani 10/31/11 . chapter 1 So it makes me smile, mi friendo :) So maybe when you think there is no one left to find ...maybe you are looking in all the wrong places with all the wrong expectations :) come find me...a since of hope for something or someone different.. a new list of possibilities and I am at the top!...someone somewhere has this since or knowledge that there is someone looking for a heart that matches their own? ... I like it. The little folded paper reminded me of those little folded letters Chinese girls fold and give to special friends. A whole piece of paper can be folded into a neat little package about the size of your thumb. They giggle as they pass them around to their friends. I like the image of the photographer looking at life through a personal lens. This has story elements that remind me of a book... Bottle in the Gaza Sea by Valarie Zenatti. ... maybe I wanted someone to find me also... nice :) |
Raven Jadewolfe 10/31/11 . chapter 1hmm, interesting... |
TonyL 10/31/11 . chapter 1I like this little story. If your idea was to project l;onliness you did a very good job. I am curious to know if you are going to add to the story Nicely written. |